The following revisions should be completed:
Revision 1 - Explode the Moment (Put a "spotlight" on the most important part of your story and add the details (Active verbs, "show don't tell", use your senses)
Revision 2 - Thoughts and Feelings
Once these are finished, peer edit and rewite your memoir adding in all your revisions and edits.
Today, we worked on our Memoir leads today. By the tomorrow everyone should have submitted either an Action Lead or a Reaction Lead for their Memoir. Remember, you only have to submit the lead NOT the whole memoir.
Samples of Narrative Leads